Breathe
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Hi good read and like Billy I have no crit to offer.
For me I got a strong link with the text from a English parish Church service book. (I appreciate that this might have been the last thing you were thinking of…just where these words took me). It speaks of the state of the Church and those who would populate the world with faux spirituality. Week in week out they read of the inspiration of the Holy Spirit and speak of being inspired by such, but yet they are impoverished by their own lack of experience and outward expression and further still they "beggar" the following generations with their closed attitudes, (the period). Where now the Gloria or Hallelujah that there should be! The people need to learn how to breathe again.

Thanks for the read AJ.


(08-28-2013, 07:00 PM)Erthona Wrote:  …confusing that which inspires with inspiration
you beggar your own generations
ending with a period
instead of an exclamation!


©2013 ~Erthona
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Messages In This Thread
Breathe - by Erthona - 08-28-2013, 07:00 PM
RE: Breathe - by fim - 08-28-2013, 07:53 PM
RE: Breathe - by tectak - 08-28-2013, 08:12 PM
RE: Breathe - by Erthona - 08-29-2013, 07:59 AM
RE: Breathe - by billy - 08-29-2013, 09:03 AM
RE: Breathe - by Erthona - 08-29-2013, 02:08 PM
RE: Breathe - by ChristopherSea - 08-29-2013, 08:31 PM
RE: Breathe - by cidermaid - 08-30-2013, 02:42 AM
RE: Breathe - by Erthona - 08-30-2013, 01:43 PM
RE: Breathe - by ChristopherSea - 09-01-2013, 12:23 AM
RE: Breathe - by Erthona - 08-30-2013, 10:52 PM
RE: Breathe - by btrudo - 08-31-2013, 03:02 AM
RE: Breathe - by Erthona - 08-31-2013, 04:58 AM
RE: Breathe - by btrudo - 08-31-2013, 06:50 AM
RE: Breathe - by Erthona - 08-31-2013, 02:20 PM
RE: Breathe - by btrudo - 09-01-2013, 01:51 AM
RE: Breathe - by ScurryFunger - 09-01-2013, 07:00 AM
RE: Breathe - by Erthona - 09-03-2013, 10:26 PM



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