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Hi I'm new.. Have a read a tell me what you think!
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08-29-2013, 11:36 PM
Hi.. Thanks for the feedback. The whole thing was fairly stream of consciousness, and I have a few ideas for improving the structure. Whimsical is definitely what I was aiming for. I really wanted to have something very simple in structure with a fun approach. Also.. It's the second poem I have ever written so the feedback is very useful! Thanks folks :0)
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Hi I'm new.. Have a read a tell me what you think! - by Xenophon - 08-28-2013, 10:17 PM
RE: Hi I'm new.. Have a read a tell me what you think! - by jdguyb - 08-29-2013, 06:37 AM
RE: Hi I'm new.. Have a read a tell me what you think! - by makeshift - 08-29-2013, 07:42 AM
RE: Hi I'm new.. Have a read a tell me what you think! - by Xenophon - 08-29-2013, 11:36 PM
RE: Hi I'm new.. Have a read a tell me what you think! - by casper-zakelijk - 08-31-2013, 06:37 PM
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