08-29-2013, 02:08 PM
Thanks Billy. Yeah I almost put it in the short form section. I think it actually comes closer to a senryu sans form, than something in English that incorporates the so-called senryu form, as equating "morae" to syllable is just so much bullshit in terms of what the morae actually does in the Japanese poem.
Dale
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.