08-29-2013, 09:03 AM
it's almost a haiku okay, senryu 
this is what i get. from it. inspiration is a concept. something that inspires is something that is an article. a real thing (even if it's a dream) ..i'll stop now. the last part was clever and i liked the piece as a whole,
okay i'm going on. if you confuse one with the other you'll have nothing to say or do of substance.
i give up, i liked it and see no nits.
i like the ... at the beginning and see the quote as part of a bigger idea because of it
this is what i get. from it. inspiration is a concept. something that inspires is something that is an article. a real thing (even if it's a dream) ..i'll stop now. the last part was clever and i liked the piece as a whole,
okay i'm going on. if you confuse one with the other you'll have nothing to say or do of substance.
i give up, i liked it and see no nits.
i like the ... at the beginning and see the quote as part of a bigger idea because of it
(08-28-2013, 07:00 PM)Erthona Wrote: …confusing that which inspires with inspiration
you beggar your own generations
ending with a period
instead of an exclamation!
©2013 ~Erthona