Senryu (August 28, 2013) (Edit)

Senryu (August 28, 2013) (Edit)

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08-29-2013, 12:16 AM

Thanks for your response billy.
I completely follow what you're saying about it being too contrived. I'll tinker with the idea some more and see if I can make it sound more.. natural.
My best.

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Senryu (August 28, 2013) (Edit) - by Volaticus - 08-28-2013, 11:41 AM

RE: Senryu (August 28, 2013) - by billy - 08-28-2013, 12:50 PM

RE: Senryu (August 28, 2013) - by Volaticus - 08-29-2013, 12:16 AM

RE: Senryu (August 28, 2013) (Edit) - by Volaticus - 08-30-2013, 08:28 AM

RE: Senryu (August 28, 2013) (Edit) - by billy - 08-30-2013, 12:50 PM

RE: Senryu (August 28, 2013) (Edit) - by Volaticus - 08-31-2013, 05:58 AM

RE: Senryu (August 28, 2013) (Edit) - by Graystar - 11-03-2013, 03:30 PM

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