Breathe

[fim]

…confusing that which inspires with inspiration
you beggar your own generations
ending with a period
instead of an exclamation!


©2013 ~Erthona

Erthonia,
Compelling message. Powerful ending. Brilliant economy of words (I am envious) and excellent meter. The first line perplexes me (that is one of the aspects of the poem that intrigues me), but too often I focus on the thin layer of ice that covers the pond and not the richness of what lies beneath.
Nice job!
fim