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I think if you started with

"time is the ultimate quietus..."

and dropped the question this would be stronger.

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I guess Billy succinctly covered everything else I might have said Hysterical

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Score Card - by Petrichor - 08-28-2013, 01:14 PM
RE: Score Card - by billy - 08-28-2013, 04:18 PM
RE: Score Card - by Erthona - 08-28-2013, 07:44 PM



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