Missing Woman

[ChristopherSea]

ask leanne about me and meter chris. i struggled so hard with it, thankfully i'm now at that stage where i'm beginning to see what she and milo say, and how to utilize it. i still make mistakes and my iambs still read as a bit forced but i am getting better. the ear apparantly, apart from the eye and the brain is the most important part of knowing if a poem works or not. :J:

OK, I will ask her. I have my tru/bil edit version 3.0 up. It seems smoother and may have a more subtle reveal.