Missing Woman
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Thanks Billy! I tried to use the last stanza as a reveal that the couple didn't just break up, but that she has deceased, of course. It may come off too gimmicky, because it is of a different syle than the rest. It was meant to be the sober reality, as it were. Meter is tough for me, other than count, Huh but I will try to sound it out and make the adjustments that you recommend. Much obliged for the read and opinion! Thumbsup/Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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Missing Woman - by ChristopherSea - 08-25-2013, 11:05 PM
RE: Missing Woman - by billy - 08-28-2013, 10:08 AM
RE: Missing Woman - by ChristopherSea - 08-28-2013, 10:37 AM
RE: Missing Woman - by billy - 08-28-2013, 10:52 AM
RE: Missing Woman - by ChristopherSea - 08-28-2013, 11:23 AM
RE: Missing Woman - by billy - 08-29-2013, 07:35 AM
RE: Missing Woman - by ChristopherSea - 08-29-2013, 07:58 AM
RE: Missing Woman - by Leanne - 08-30-2013, 05:44 AM
RE: Missing Woman - by ChristopherSea - 08-30-2013, 06:30 AM
RE: Missing Woman - by billy - 08-30-2013, 08:00 AM
RE: Missing Woman - by ChristopherSea - 09-01-2013, 06:10 AM
RE: Missing Woman - by EileenGreay - 09-05-2013, 03:39 AM
RE: Missing Woman - by Spikerider - 09-05-2013, 04:54 AM
RE: Missing Woman - by ChristopherSea - 09-08-2013, 02:03 AM



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