'Neath Golden Flames

[metalfan91]

I appreciate your attempt at feedback, but if you really tried to read this and feel you can't comment, why comment at all? If anyone else suggests to change the capitalization or punctuation, I might consider; but if you are not going to even attempt any meaningful analysis of thematic elements or sentiments, then I can't take your comment seriously. With all due respect, of course.

I'll admit, I don't write poetry with technical aspects in mind, although they do have their place. I like to focus on the idea I'm trying to convey, and I honestly do not feel this is in any way too difficult to read. Anyone have real feedback? It would be appreciated.

I was just trying to help, but I can see this'll be the last time.
With all due respect.

I put a lot of passion into this one as it is a compliment to a song I wrote, but that's no excuse for being discourteous. I got a little heated with your response, which I shouldn't have. Yes, the "with all due respect" made me sound like an ass for which I am at fault. I did take your advice and changed the punctuation and capitalization. It actually looks a little neater. Thanks for the help.