08-27-2013, 03:28 AM
The lines:
dragging,
and
strapped a strep
I added those two lines, changed things and worked them in, weeks after it was finished to kind of upset myself, because I didn't like those parts.
I still don't like those parts, but I needed to do something to satisfy what so far wasn't satisfying for the last part of the whole eight part thing.
It wasn't satisfying, but it was the story I kept seeing. Only the written poetry wasn't quite there till I threw something in that at least made it feel created.
The whole part eight takes place in the tv room of a mental hospital. It goes on and on, but I ended it.
A few more poems, and I'll be tired of my theme of imprisonment. I hope.
dragging,
and
strapped a strep
I added those two lines, changed things and worked them in, weeks after it was finished to kind of upset myself, because I didn't like those parts.
I still don't like those parts, but I needed to do something to satisfy what so far wasn't satisfying for the last part of the whole eight part thing.
It wasn't satisfying, but it was the story I kept seeing. Only the written poetry wasn't quite there till I threw something in that at least made it feel created.
The whole part eight takes place in the tv room of a mental hospital. It goes on and on, but I ended it.
A few more poems, and I'll be tired of my theme of imprisonment. I hope.