08-27-2013, 02:36 AM
Enjoyed both versions.
Flow and meter made for an easy pleasant read.
Personally resonate more with the original. The opening line of the last stanza holds more impact for me. But that's just me - an old fool.
I enjoy both ways.
Two snaps!!
Flow and meter made for an easy pleasant read.
Personally resonate more with the original. The opening line of the last stanza holds more impact for me. But that's just me - an old fool.
I enjoy both ways.
Two snaps!!