08-27-2013, 12:07 AM
(08-26-2013, 11:45 AM)Volaticus Wrote: All the capitalized words, the lack of punctuation and awkward lines made this a difficult read. It distracted me from what was actually said and so I don't feel I can comment on the content.I appreciate your attempt at feedback, but if you really tried to read this and feel you can't comment, why comment at all? If anyone else suggests to change the capitalization or punctuation, I might consider; but if you are not going to even attempt any meaningful analysis of thematic elements or sentiments, then I can't take your comment seriously. With all due respect, of course.
JMHO.
I'll admit, I don't write poetry with technical aspects in mind, although they do have their place. I like to focus on the idea I'm trying to convey, and I honestly do not feel this is in any way too difficult to read. Anyone have real feedback? It would be appreciated.