08-26-2013, 12:52 PM
Hi Bunx,
Since this is the misc. forum I just wrote down the typos I caught on my read-throughs.
S1L2 should be 'your head'.
S2L1: 'your eyes'.
S5L1-4: The wording here seems strange or awkward.
S6L1: 'than water'?
S7L4: "dusk's"?
S7L5: "computer's".
Thanks for the read
Best,
Louise
Since this is the misc. forum I just wrote down the typos I caught on my read-throughs.
S1L2 should be 'your head'.
S2L1: 'your eyes'.
S5L1-4: The wording here seems strange or awkward.
S6L1: 'than water'?
S7L4: "dusk's"?
S7L5: "computer's".
Thanks for the read

Best,
Louise

