Miss why cant you sleep?
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Hi Bunx,

Since this is the misc. forum I just wrote down the typos I caught on my read-throughs.

S1L2 should be 'your head'.
S2L1: 'your eyes'.
S5L1-4: The wording here seems strange or awkward.
S6L1: 'than water'?
S7L4: "dusk's"?
S7L5: "computer's".

Thanks for the read Smile
Best,
Louise
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Miss why cant you sleep? - by Bunx - 08-26-2013, 01:41 AM
RE: Miss why cant you sleep? - by Volaticus - 08-26-2013, 12:52 PM
RE: Miss why cant you sleep? - by Bunx - 08-26-2013, 12:57 PM



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