And Then I Look Away (edit 1)
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(08-23-2013, 10:22 PM)btrudo Wrote:  maybe I finally have gotten around to posting something...

And Then I Look Away

I have become caught in traffic.
It's seven-thirty and I know
a half-hour later it would not be
so much so. But I keep staring,
forcing the car between the lines,
because life demands the paycheck
and the paycheck demands the hour
and the hour demands that I sit,
a face trapped behind the windshield,
caught among all these wheels and all
these shields. And sometimes I catch a set
of eyes sealed in their own lined world.
Sometimes they also catch mine.
nearly everyone lives a mundane life, innit.

You know that film with Micheal Douglas? Falling down? You watched that and then you wrote this, yeah?
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And Then I Look Away (edit 1) - by btrudo - 08-23-2013, 10:22 PM
RE: And Then I Look Away - by tectak - 08-23-2013, 11:31 PM
RE: And Then I Look Away - by btrudo - 08-24-2013, 07:28 AM
RE: And Then I Look Away - by Leanne - 08-24-2013, 03:32 AM
RE: And Then I Look Away - by ScurryFunger - 08-24-2013, 05:19 AM
RE: And Then I Look Away - by milo - 08-24-2013, 09:48 AM
RE: And Then I Look Away - by ScurryFunger - 08-26-2013, 01:28 AM
RE: And Then I Look Away - by btrudo - 08-26-2013, 11:44 AM
RE: And Then I Look Away - by tectak - 08-26-2013, 09:23 PM
RE: And Then I Look Away - by btrudo - 08-26-2013, 11:26 PM
RE: And Then I Look Away - by tectak - 08-26-2013, 11:53 PM
RE: And Then I Look Away - by Survivor - 08-26-2013, 02:45 AM
RE: And Then I Look Away - by Leanne - 08-26-2013, 04:34 AM
RE: And Then I Look Away - by metalfan91 - 08-26-2013, 08:06 AM



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