Lung Darts

[ScurryFunger]

A stain on my teeth: yellowish color,
like that of a rotten banana.
Screams go unheard for many years
from my lungs: suffocating.
The strength of desire:
uncontrollable,
whenever I
try to quit
smoking
them.

the stain on a smokers teeth isnt yellow, it's brown, so, that matches the 'rotten banana' thing, change 'yellowish' to 'brownish' and you're on a winner, lol.