After the Flood

After the Flood

ChristopherSea Offline

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#24

08-23-2013, 09:23 PM

Tom, there's a bump in your great piece. Trim that 10-syllable count in your last line:

'a new chance provided there's rain'

or something! Smile

My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris

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After the Flood - by tectak - 08-20-2013, 07:13 PM

RE: After the Flood - by milo - 08-20-2013, 07:29 PM

RE: After the Flood - by tectak - 08-20-2013, 07:45 PM

RE: After the Flood - by milo - 08-20-2013, 08:05 PM

RE: After the Flood - by tectak - 08-20-2013, 10:11 PM

RE: After the Flood - by tectak - 08-20-2013, 11:51 PM

RE: After the Flood - by milo - 08-21-2013, 11:34 AM

RE: After the Flood - by tectak - 08-21-2013, 05:17 PM

RE: After the Flood - by tectak - 08-21-2013, 10:13 PM

RE: After the Flood - by cidermaid - 08-22-2013, 02:51 AM

RE: After the Flood - by tectak - 08-22-2013, 03:14 AM

RE: After the Flood - by cidermaid - 08-22-2013, 04:37 AM

RE: After the Flood - by btrudo - 08-22-2013, 09:06 AM

RE: After the Flood - by ChristopherSea - 08-23-2013, 09:23 PM

RE: After the Flood - by btrudo - 08-23-2013, 10:06 PM

RE: After the Flood - by tectak - 08-24-2013, 06:05 AM

RE: After the Flood - by heslopian - 08-24-2013, 11:27 AM

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