08-23-2013, 03:11 PM
Thanks bt, for your insights. I have wrapped this one but would like to respond to your "overall" observations. It is about a farmer. There is always too much rain or not enough rain.
The "again" is self sufficient...it means again, if you get my point. You are absolutely correct on that comma. I had already removed it on my copy.I would like to say it was a typo...but it was an error Credited. btw.Do you write poetry?
Best and thanks,
tectak
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A farmer. Too much or too little rain. And?
Some times I write a lot of poetry, but recently, not so much.
Bill
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Hi bill,
You will do well on a poetry site
Best,
tectak
The "again" is self sufficient...it means again, if you get my point. You are absolutely correct on that comma. I had already removed it on my copy.I would like to say it was a typo...but it was an error
Credited. btw.Do you write poetry?Best and thanks,
tectak
[/quote]
A farmer. Too much or too little rain. And?
Some times I write a lot of poetry, but recently, not so much.
Bill
[/quote]
Hi bill,
You will do well on a poetry site
Best,
tectak