08-23-2013, 11:03 AM
Billy, i started editing mid way though you suggestions, i think... but i did go with a rhyme scheme and went with a fantasy theme..kind of out there. i will do an edit where i use 4 to 5 line stanza no rhyming and see what I'll come up with using the same themes
hmm, i think i can stil use some of the lines. i'll await suggestion
hmm, i think i can stil use some of the lines. i'll await suggestion
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
--mark twain
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