Mentor: Generic love poem
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Billy, i started editing mid way though you suggestions, i think... but i did go with a rhyme scheme and went with a fantasy theme..kind of out there. i will do an edit where i use 4 to 5 line stanza no rhyming and see what I'll come up with using the same themes

hmm, i think i can stil use some of the lines. i'll await suggestion Smile
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Mentor: Generic love poem - by Bunx - 08-21-2013, 06:23 AM
RE: Mentor: Generic love poem - by billy - 08-22-2013, 01:46 PM
RE: Mentor: Generic love poem - by Bunx - 08-23-2013, 06:32 AM
RE: Mentor: Generic love poem - by billy - 08-23-2013, 10:21 AM
RE: Mentor: Generic love poem - by Bunx - 08-23-2013, 11:03 AM
RE: Mentor: Generic love poem - by billy - 08-23-2013, 03:53 PM
RE: Mentor: Generic love poem - by Josho - 08-23-2013, 04:05 PM
RE: Mentor: Generic love poem - by Bunx - 08-24-2013, 12:54 AM
RE: Mentor: Generic love poem - by billy - 08-24-2013, 02:30 PM
RE: Mentor: Generic love poem - by Bunx - 08-24-2013, 02:58 PM
RE: Mentor: Generic love poem - by billy - 08-24-2013, 05:31 PM



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