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Rabbit haiku

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08-23-2013, 09:09 AM

(08-19-2013, 03:27 AM)Bunx Wrote: sleeping in grass
a rabbit
without a tail

so is the emphasis on the rabbit?

sleeping in grass
without a tail
rabbit

or is on the lack of tail?

sleeping in grass
a rabbit
where's your tail?

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Rabbit haiku - by Bunx - 08-19-2013, 03:27 AM

RE: Rabbit haiku - by Bunx - 08-19-2013, 10:15 AM

RE: Rabbit haiku - by btrudo - 08-23-2013, 09:09 AM

RE: Rabbit haiku - by billy - 08-23-2013, 10:32 AM

RE: Rabbit haiku - by Bunx - 08-24-2013, 01:01 AM

RE: Rabbit haiku - by Malu - 09-20-2013, 03:04 AM

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