Ginger
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cider! thanks so much for all the suggestions. I changed up the poem quite a bit, took some lines out and added some other for the serious tone of the poem. before i was trying to convey more of a monologue as if a boy was talking to himself. hope you like the edits (hopefully there grammatically sound)
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Ginger - by Bunx - 08-22-2013, 03:22 AM
RE: Ginger - by cidermaid - 08-22-2013, 05:31 AM
RE: Ginger - by Bunx - 08-23-2013, 05:00 AM



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