Her Special Place

[ChristopherSea]

Hey Billy, I see you are repainting this landscape again. I like how it is coming along. Here's some more suggestions to prolong your agony and ecstacy with this one.

An evergreen ocean of roiling hills; ‘rolling’ to ‘roiling,’ are the hills muddy or angry? (maybe ‘sinuous’ or ‘serpentine’)
the broad expanse of England's heathered spine. Nice
Captive Sunday ramblers wonderful!
upheld by gnarled blackthorn staffs. love those staffs, but not ‘upheld’ (‘steadied’ or ‘guided’ ?)
Strings of limestone monoliths spread like the image, but not ‘spread’ I see litter as ‘scattered’ or ‘tossed’
like litter on the moor;
broken strands of time. cool
Tired waterfowl alighted on mercurial waters lovely
in a demure flap of webbed feet and violent wings. violent may conflict with tired above (‘weary wings’?)

A thousand threads of white rippled
a canvas of Picasso's blue. I dig this!

Kestrels hovered; heads to the wind need to beef this close up somehow
searching heath and sky.



This is more for me than you, but let’s see how badly I mangled this:

An evergreen ocean of sinuous hills;
the broad expanse of England's heathered spine.
Captive Sunday ramblers
guided by blackthorn staffs.

Filaments of limestone monoliths
scattered like litter on the moor;
broken strands of time elapsed.

Tired waterfowl alit on mercurial waters
in a demure flap of webbed feet and preening wings.
A thousand threads of white
rippled a canvas of Picasso's blue.

Kestrels hovered; their bills to the wind,
surveying heath and sky.


Cheers!/Chris