Her Special Place
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An evergreen ocean of roiling hills;
the broad expanse of England's heathered spine.
Captive Sunday ramblers
upheld by gnarled blackthorn staffs.

Strings of limestone monoliths spread
like litter on the moor;
broken strands of time.
Tired waterfowl alighted on mercurial waters
in a demure flap of webbed feet and violent wings.

A thousand threads of white rippled
a canvas of Picasso's blue.


Kestrels hovered; heads to the wind
searching heath and sky.


2nd edit thanks goes to tom and anyone else who's helping me :J:
Quote:An evergreen ocean of rolling hills;
the broad expanse of England's heathered spine.
Captive Sunday ramblers
with gnarly blackthorn staffs.

A string of Limestone monoliths spread
across the moor, broken strands of time.
Tired waterfowl would alight on mercurial waters
in a flap of webbed feet and violent wings.

A thousand threads of white as rippled
across a canvas of Picasso's blue.
Kestrels hovered, pressed against the wind
waited on the wing before they dove.



1st edit.



just a quickie.

Quote:When people mention heather, they are almost always talking about two different genera of plants: heaths and heathers. Although both belong to the Ericaceae family, they are botanically different and are divided into the Calluna genus and the Erica genus. For practical purposes, however, they are nearly identical, sharing color, form, and growth habits. They are all evergreen, well-mannered, and low-maintenance plants that thrive in similar conditions of sunlight, water, and soil. Winter hardiness is the only major difference between species.

a duck is waterfowl. web feet an all, i never give the impression i was on about moor hens etc

some good points elsewhere Wink
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Messages In This Thread
Her Special Place - by billy - 08-08-2013, 10:44 AM
RE: Her Special Place - by R.C. KITCHENS - 08-08-2013, 11:07 AM
RE: Her Special Place - by billy - 08-08-2013, 11:33 AM
RE: Her Special Place - by Keith - 08-08-2013, 11:26 AM
RE: Her Special Place - by ray - 08-08-2013, 06:57 PM
RE: Her Special Place - by ChristopherSea - 08-08-2013, 07:54 PM
RE: Her Special Place - by tectak - 08-08-2013, 10:30 PM
RE: Her Special Place - by GrhmJngL - 08-09-2013, 02:13 AM
RE: Her Special Place - by billy - 08-14-2013, 05:43 PM
RE: Her Special Place - by tectak - 08-22-2013, 03:20 PM
RE: Her Special Place - by billy - 08-22-2013, 04:42 PM
RE: Her Special Place - by tectak - 08-22-2013, 05:05 PM
RE: Her Special Place - by billy - 08-22-2013, 05:07 PM
RE: Her Special Place - by tectak - 08-23-2013, 01:29 AM
RE: Her Special Place - by ChristopherSea - 08-23-2013, 01:39 AM
RE: Her Special Place - by billy - 08-23-2013, 10:43 AM
RE: Her Special Place - by ChristopherSea - 08-22-2013, 10:46 PM
RE: Her Special Place - by btrudo - 08-23-2013, 07:56 AM



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