Mentor: Generic love poem

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Hey thought I would try this out. I don't know if you have to be an admin or not to comment but if you have some helpful suggestion/ideas let me know!

Amazon, greetings 1st revision
Running in the Amazon forest,
I wonder what strange women
lay ahead in the overgrowth.
A shadow noticed distant.

Diving, behind the tree
behind the bushes that blind me.
A fare amazon warrior
stands there and lets
her hair down.

She tip toes into my fire,
than looks at me with a smirk.
She hands me dry meat
of some sort. Why argue
when you're not defiant.

Being around a warrior does
grave things to a man heart.
his organ is tender, easily pierced.

Lass, I maybe be a halfling,
may I kiss with stern command.

She smiles again,
the next day I wake up
Drunken from wine
in a morning memory clot.

Uhh, thanks for the food miss
I say, with a blush. Here
is my horse than, will you help me up?

Well there is a toad in the road
the girls points out with a modest laugh,
I'll miss you little small man
you put my heart to the test.

Elfs, the death of me


Generic Love Poem

EDIT 1
So here we are you plus I
going for my ideal situation.
You plus me I think I have
wanted to see the half
never seen.

Half of me is given away freely
for a stolen meal, a kiss or three,
only if you want to be
my other half-ling.

One must be short of coarse.
I don't want to stand on
the tip of my toes for a romantic finale.

If I do, we could have a cup of joe
seeing where my vertical challenge leads.

Leading us to the side of the road,
your car is there.
In my chest, a toad.

Well thanks for the tea, I say
with a slurping slip.

Tall girls, the death of me.