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08-21-2013, 12:46 AM

TOMH thanks for the comment and edits! i did follow your advise, hopefully the poem makes more sense and takes more shape to the reader.

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Snail - by Bunx - 08-08-2013, 03:54 AM

RE: Snail - by jdguyb - 08-08-2013, 05:34 AM

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RE: Snail - by Bunx - 08-08-2013, 12:49 PM

RE: Snail - by Volaticus - 08-08-2013, 01:23 PM

RE: Snail - by Peacheep - 08-08-2013, 01:12 PM

RE: Snail - by Bunx - 08-09-2013, 09:25 AM

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RE: Snail - by Bunx - 08-10-2013, 01:39 AM

RE: Snail - by Bunx - 08-16-2013, 02:26 AM

RE: Snail - by Keith - 08-20-2013, 09:30 AM

RE: Snail - by Bunx - 08-21-2013, 12:46 AM

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