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Lung Darts
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08-20-2013, 03:46 AM
i like this poem alot. continuing minimalist line structure brings the notion of death into the poem, which is highlighted by deterioration.
awesome poem! wish i had more to say 
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Lung Darts - by TheWall0912 - 08-19-2013, 09:01 PM
RE: Lung Darts - by ChristopherSea - 08-19-2013, 09:37 PM
RE: Lung Darts - by Bunx - 08-20-2013, 03:46 AM
RE: Lung Darts - by Keith - 08-20-2013, 08:52 AM
RE: Lung Darts - by Kezz - 08-23-2013, 07:38 PM
RE: Lung Darts - by ScurryFunger - 08-24-2013, 05:13 AM
RE: Lung Darts - by BillyM - 08-28-2013, 10:14 AM
RE: Lung Darts - by Erthona - 08-30-2013, 10:58 PM
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