Lung Darts

[ChristopherSea]

I like this one, the message, the image, the inverted etheree structure and the clever title. Those colons may not be needed and yellowish is not a favorite. A possible edit is:

A stain on my teeth, yellow in color,
like that of a rotten banana.
Screams go unheard for many years
from my lungs suffocating.
The strength of desire's
uncontrollable,
whenever I
try to quit
smoking
them.