08-17-2013, 03:12 PM
You know what I like this . A pretty good summation of what it feels like to have lost in love though a bit dramatic towards the end for my taste. My only comment would be to lose the last 12 or so lines as I feel it stands on its own up to then.
A good effort here.Not pretentious just honest feeling that for anyone who's lost in love are real
A good effort here.Not pretentious just honest feeling that for anyone who's lost in love are real