08-17-2013, 01:14 PM
(08-15-2013, 02:18 AM)ChristopherSea Wrote: finalI don't have anything else to add that hasn't been covered. Just one issue, though maybe it's just me. When I read "I'm dead-head to head", I actually read "dead-head" as joined words. Is this intentional? Maybe make the dash longer, or put a space, like: "dead — head".
I’m dead-head to head
with bronzing sunflowers,
wearing my Grandpa’s
tattered Fedora.
I'm glad you decided to give it some touch ups, the meter is good now in the final
.

