No way to treat royalty

[Keith]

Your use of foul language in your last verse shows your true talent. You ain't no poet .
Sometimes things are best left unsaid. An extremely disappointing end to a cliche ridden offering

Hi animasrwn,
I find it quite bizzar you have gone to the trouble of trawling back in the archives to a poem you obviously dislike, however my main problem with your feedback is that you give me nothing to work on, other than, the fact I use expletives renders me impotent as a poet, all this I can take on the chin as you have your own opinion but please if you feel strongly enough to tell me "I'm not a poet" then at least justify what lines you believe to be cliche. I do agree completely with one thing you said, "Sometimes things are best left unsaid". If you really want to tell me how crap I am I have at least 12 poems here that have no comments at all which is probably a good indication that they are crap, so why not post on one of them at least I'll get rid of one of my '0's >< Best TOMH