The Passover

The Passover

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08-16-2013, 06:56 AM

[quote='ScurryFunger' pid='136601' dateline='1376584996']
Thanks for the feedback, guys. I like scurry finger 's idea of hanging the title. I want to call it "The Passover" but I'm not sure I can just change it without it appearing as a new poem.

Oh crumbs, isn't 'the passover' a bit jewish when it's about catholic marriage guilt (or something).

Passover is Jewish but Christians observe it too. I was thinking more about the man passing over into death....well, you get that, I'm sure.
Thanks.

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The Passover - by Vistaldust - 08-04-2013, 06:42 AM

RE: When Souls Say Goodbye - by rowens - 08-05-2013, 01:01 AM

RE: When Souls Say Goodbye - by Vistaldust - 08-05-2013, 06:56 AM

RE: When Souls Say Goodbye - by rowens - 08-14-2013, 06:38 AM

RE: When Souls Say Goodbye - by Vistaldust - 08-14-2013, 09:53 AM

RE: When Souls Say Goodbye - by milo - 08-14-2013, 10:01 AM

RE: When Souls Say Goodbye - by Vistaldust - 08-14-2013, 10:14 AM

RE: When Souls Say Goodbye - by ScurryFunger - 08-14-2013, 12:10 PM

RE: When Souls Say Goodbye - by Vistaldust - 08-15-2013, 12:39 AM

RE: The Passover - by ScurryFunger - 08-16-2013, 01:43 AM