I spent my summer learning french.

[ChristopherSea]

I liked your piece, but you need to punctuate properly! Capitalize French everywhere. Punctuate everywhere, the entire first stanza is a single sentence, therfore a semicolon and two commas are needed with cap adjustment. S2 Period after capped French. S3 Period after capped French. Comma after beauty. Not certain why use quotes. S4 Comma after smooth and memorized. Adjust cap. Period after eyes. S4 Fix French! This close was fantastic, good job!