Silence

[ChristopherSea]

If true, I am sorry for your loss. This is well done, it's emotive and confessional. Loved the swinging legs and casket descriptors, as I am big on visuals. If you are not going to use periods, all caps for all lines is not desirable, as the reader may lose your intended flow. Thank you for sharing your heart, soul and moving story herein. This poem should not be in the novice forum in my opinion. Keep writing and posting please!