Short Story: Yellow

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I liked it, thought the focus of yellow in the beginning was a bit much. After that first few sentences you were more subtle in incorporating it. The one thing, a little old lady with a gold stapler, I get the impression she hit Penn with it.
If so, it just seems unlikely she could come down with enough force to knock a man out. Either that or Penn passed out. That is my uncertainty. Good little effort, wasn't long and read smoothly.

Yes. There are a lot of unlikely things in the story. :]