08-14-2013, 01:09 PM
I respect the attempt to use any sort of meter, however, I would suggest not compromising flow and wording to keep it going.
There were definitely parts of this poem that I loved and made it come alive for me, but just some of the wording came of as peculiar.
There were definitely parts of this poem that I loved and made it come alive for me, but just some of the wording came of as peculiar.