Nap time stories
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It made me smile, especially the last stanza and 'spilled clockwork innards' (brilliant image).
I think 'there' in L3 should be 'they're'.
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Nap time stories - by Keith - 08-10-2013, 06:27 AM
RE: Nap time stories - by Volaticus - 08-14-2013, 12:22 PM
RE: Nap time stories - by Keith - 08-15-2013, 02:18 AM



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