The Passover

[Vistaldust]

This doesn't seem bad. I still think more people should read this in a more advanced critique section, so it doesn't get buried again. Me too, if I can get myself into a better mindset.

Rowen, do you know how I can move this and then delete it hear so it isn't in multiple critiques?

you can either pm a mod or wait from one to wander by and trip over it.

done.

Cool...thanks milo