Capes and Causeways (first poem please critique)

[savino76]

This is the updated 'finished version'

Eastward we go
Toward the Shore
Gazing into the evening sky
The moon
The stars
The satellites
Fill the heavens of the night
It’s celestial navigation, guiding us as we go the unknown ways
Through this Tropical Camelot of thick air and nautical breezes
I come to find myself
A western man am I
Unacquainted with these lands
And dreaming of eternity

Again, please let me know what you think.