Short Story: Yellow

[ChristopherSea]

I have never reviewed prose before on a forum, so you would probably receive more constructive feedback elsewhere. Nonetheless, I loved the watercolor pallet of gamboge hues that you employed to paint this micro-story newsclippings. I felt like I was reading it with a borrowed pair of Van Gogh’s spectacles, while sipping absinthe in his yellow house at No. 2 Lamartine Place, ha ha. You can see this piece has been polished more than once and it comes off very amusing. I thought that the dialog was realistic, the narrative witty and I appreciated the shared stream of consciousness of the narrator, as it added accents without being verbose. Nice work and thanks so much for sharing it!/Chris