08-13-2013, 09:23 PM
I like this very much, the story of addiction often gets overplayed but I think you've managed to make this original.
"I've lied to myself
many times,"
Simple, yet effective, I think those few words speak volumes and supports the tone of the piece nicely.
Great visuals produced from this, there's no cryptic metaphors to contend with, making this write all the more believable and easy to relate to
I can't find a thing to pick at. I wouldn't change a thing.
"I've lied to myself
many times,"
Simple, yet effective, I think those few words speak volumes and supports the tone of the piece nicely.
Great visuals produced from this, there's no cryptic metaphors to contend with, making this write all the more believable and easy to relate to
I can't find a thing to pick at. I wouldn't change a thing.