08-13-2013, 04:43 PM
(08-13-2013, 03:21 AM)ray Wrote: Milo - I think you've a good point about too much scene setting and too little plot. However, when someone can pretend not to understand "above us in the heather" so as to make witty remarks about bug poems, I sense a sneerer and if I wanted PFFA-type comments, I'd go there.You don't have to "sense" anything, this is the /serious/ critique forum. If you are not ready for frank discussion about the merits and techniques in the poem, an entity completely and entirely unrelated to you, refrain from posting in the serious workshopping forum until you are or, I will move your post to one of the lesser forums .