08-13-2013, 03:54 AM
the wall- thanks for the read/comments. I tried to expand some possible ideas to appeal to some emotional concepts already shown in the poem. thanks for all the grammar/typos. I do re-read everything I post. I feel as if i am still extremely new at this.
tec- thanks for the fine tooth comb read though. I changed what i could in regards to your comments. cliches seem to be my down fall in general, i heard them all the time growing up. anyways, i hope all is well. i look it over again and see if i can make any more corrections before someone else rips me a new one
tec- thanks for the fine tooth comb read though. I changed what i could in regards to your comments. cliches seem to be my down fall in general, i heard them all the time growing up. anyways, i hope all is well. i look it over again and see if i can make any more corrections before someone else rips me a new one
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
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--mark twain
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