08-13-2013, 03:12 AM
There are lots of things you could do with it. The rhymes and rhythm make it feel careless, but it depends on how tongue in cheek you want it to be. You have a lot of stuff to work with. Unless you're satisfied.
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love me yet? - by ScurryFunger - 08-13-2013, 02:34 AM
RE: love me yet? - by rowens - 08-13-2013, 02:48 AM
RE: love me yet? - by ScurryFunger - 08-13-2013, 03:02 AM
RE: love me yet? - by rowens - 08-13-2013, 03:12 AM
RE: love me yet? - by ScurryFunger - 08-16-2013, 01:31 AM
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