Love

[milo]

There's no love lost between us cliche
Only dreams abstraction
There's no chance for us abstraction/cliche
Only reality abstraction
There's nothing left for us abstraction/cliche
Only silence abstraction
Yet still we stay abstraction
Yet still we hope abstraction
Yet still we care abstraction
Is this what love is? cliche
Endurance abstraction

what you have here is a list of abstractions and cliche, not a poem. Poetry needs fresh language grounded in strong concrete images and narratives to succeed. This is tired and dull in both thought and execution. Unsalvageable by any definition.

Sorry I couldn't be more positive. Thanks for posting.