Love

[animasrwm]

Don't worry about being original. If this is how you feel about love, remember it, you might find that it will change.

Thanks Rachel new a woman would get it x

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There's no love lost between us a common phrase, and contradictory
Only dreams I cringe sometimes when poets talk about "dreams"
There's no chance for us But the summation says otherwise. What gives?
Only reality This line is basically meaningless
There's nothing left for us Redundant
Only silence You could explore this further
Yet still we stay
Yet still we hope
Yet still we care These three lines could be combined or condensed
Is this what love is? Is it?
Endurance Spoon feeding..maybe astute readers won't need it

Love has been done ad nauseam. If a poet endeavors to tackle it now, it deserves an original and in depth treatment. This feels general, esoteric, recycled. I don't mean to be harsh..I'd just like to see you explore this more boldly.

Interesting comments but don't worry if you just don't get it.