08-13-2013, 01:59 AM
"Impinged within the lifeless girl,
the specter saw the knife nested.
Nothingness filled the air, but just
a girl, a knife, no dream."
I feel that this stanza really brought the poem to life.....I really helped visualize a murder...Good poem
the specter saw the knife nested.
Nothingness filled the air, but just
a girl, a knife, no dream."
I feel that this stanza really brought the poem to life.....I really helped visualize a murder...Good poem