The end of a cigarette is my daughter

[ChristopherSea]

'Buffalo Bill's defunct' for me too Eileen 'onetwothree' (pretty sad when this is all I can quote from the poem). Many lyrical poets like the meter and line breaks alone to dictate word passage. It is informative to see how the poet wants us to read their poem and you make that easy. However, it is nice to know that your poem is equally compelling in a linear format. I cannot use the html method of spacing well enough to bother. I have also been softly bashed for a dash here, so I am going without. Emily Dickinson should slap me from the grave!