The American Dream

[TheWall0912]

The American Dream
You're unimportant; nothing more than a number.
You're irrelevant; indifferent from one another.
Mayhem in the moment - You've been beaten.
Breathe in the silence - Surrender your freedom.
The American Dream - The path of sorrows.
The American Dream - The end of tomorrow.

- Robbie Reaper

I agree that the poem is full of cliches, however, I did enjoy it. I like the simpleness of it and the flow. Your rhyming is a little bit off, but that can be ignored. I think you can definitely expand on this. Not sure if you want critique haha.