08-12-2013, 01:56 PM
I like the image of 'radio static rain'. It seems almost like a felt sense of helplessness (when the t.v gets white noise and you cant find the remote). A lie is told in order to be provided security from the storm. Questions faith while in prayer. Brandon I like your last line because it shows that the individual, while being uncertain and continues to question his faith, finds some sort of contentment. Its slightly uplifting (very slightly). Its kind of positive; "and for the time, it would do".
"It would do", makes me think "it is good enough".
Anyway, that was mostly me thinking out loud.
"It would do", makes me think "it is good enough".
Anyway, that was mostly me thinking out loud.