Etheree
#4
I didn't pick up on the typo, even though I checked it numerous times. So that is slightly embarrassing. It is a double and i probably (correct use this time), should of mentioned that. I was asked to wright a love poem and this was my attempt. I really appreciate the the comments and the time used to look over it. I will be reworking it and taking your comments heavily into consideration.
Thank you.
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ChristopherSea
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Etheree - by Martyr - 08-11-2013, 09:41 PM
RE: Etheree - by ChristopherSea - 08-12-2013, 07:46 AM
RE: Etheree - by billy - 08-12-2013, 10:18 AM
RE: Etheree - by Martyr - 08-12-2013, 12:44 PM



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